What's your reaction to the story?

Tell me how you feel about the 1st Chapter in this twisted story of love, sex and deceit.

14 comments

  • Keya

    Keya AZ

    I love this 1st chapter. That ending was such a turn in the story. The 1 thing he truly loves & then it's no more. My goodness I can not wait for the rest. I LOVE this. I can't say that enough. Great job.

    I love this 1st chapter. That ending was such a turn in the story. The 1 thing he truly loves & then it's no more. My goodness I can not wait for the rest. I LOVE this. I can't say that enough. Great job.

  • Jessica Edmond

    Jessica Edmond

    Luv it luv it luv it. It started off kinda like the thoughts of a man and it just escalated into a story. I need chapter 2 to come out.

    Luv it luv it luv it. It started off kinda like the thoughts of a man and it just escalated into a story. I need chapter 2 to come out.

  • Genee

    Genee

    Story is very well written and the characters are relatable. I would defiantly purchase this book. Cant wait for the next installment. I'm hooked.

    Story is very well written and the characters are relatable. I would defiantly purchase this book. Cant wait for the next installment. I'm hooked.

  • Shanelle

    Shanelle Jamaica

    I love it..... Just one part that concerns me is where he had sex without a condom,men be thinking with their dicks all the time.

    I love it..... Just one part that concerns me is where he had sex without a condom,men be thinking with their dicks all the time.

  • Kelz

    Kelz London

    How or why did he think the baby was his? Also how comes he only just found out about the baby's actual . Aaah, I kinda hope he got the sister pregnant to be honest. Now that WOULD be a story.

    How or why did he think the baby was his? Also how comes he only just found out about the baby's actual . Aaah, I kinda hope he got the sister pregnant to be honest. Now that WOULD be a story.

  • Tara

    Tara

    Absolutely love it.

    Absolutely love it.

  • Nene

    Nene Anderson SC

    I haven't read anything this good in ah long time! 💯💯

    I haven't read anything this good in ah long time! 💯💯

  • Morgan

    Morgan Australia

    Thoroughly enjoy reading this story as it unravels. I find myself relating to different emotions characters feel at different times. What I love about this story is the relatability. We all know men who are similar to some in this story. It's really great to get a guys pov.

    Thoroughly enjoy reading this story as it unravels. I find myself relating to different emotions characters feel at different times. What I love about this story is the relatability. We all know men who are similar to some in this story. It's really great to get a guys pov.

  • Renee

    Renee Virginia

    Loved it! I really enjoyed the first chapter. I cant wait for the rest .....AWESOME JOB!!!

    Loved it! I really enjoyed the first chapter. I cant wait for the rest .....AWESOME JOB!!!

  • Nene

    Nene New jersey

    Keep doing whats you're doing!!

    Keep doing whats you're doing!!

  • sandy

    sandy

    Just simply adored it Make a movie out of this

    Just simply adored it

    Make a movie out of this

  • Johanna

    Johanna NJ

    Omg!!!!! I love it!!! With each chapter the story gets better & better! I wish I could purchase the book. The suspense is killing me!

    Omg!!!!! I love it!!! With each chapter the story gets better & better! I wish I could purchase the book. The suspense is killing me!

  • ASK DR. LINQ

    ASK DR. LINQ

    @johanna Thanks!! I'm working on making that happen soon! 📖

    @johanna Thanks!! I'm working on making that happen soon! 📖

  • Dynetta Mcdonald

    Dynetta Mcdonald Chicago Il

    I can really appreciate a great book. And this here is Everything!! So many women and young girls can relate to this book. Its such a great eye opener for us all, men included. All the thoughts that we have about men and their actions. They come to light in this book. Just proving to us women to always follow our hearts and intuition. Now ladies we are not off the hook. Just as well as men can be dirty dogs. We like to be messy little kitties and get our paws filthy and not know it. We are so caught up in the mindset that anything a man can do we can do better. We tend to forget that its a small world. Also whats done in the dark must come to light. I just cant wait to see how all of the negative karma will unravel in this book. I see it and I feel it. Congratulations hun, because you have done something men have been afraid of doing. They think they may be giving away the secret of how men think. At the same time giving us women one up on the game. Just know this is genius. I am hear for the long run. Anxiously awaiting books arrival!!!

    I can really appreciate a great book. And this here is Everything!! So many women and young girls can relate to this book. Its such a great eye opener for us all, men included. All the thoughts that we have about men and their actions. They come to light in this book. Just proving to us women to always follow our hearts and intuition. Now ladies we are not off the hook. Just as well as men can be dirty dogs. We like to be messy little kitties and get our paws filthy and not know it. We are so caught up in the mindset that anything a man can do we can do better. We tend to forget that its a small world. Also whats done in the dark must come to light. I just cant wait to see how all of the negative karma will unravel in this book. I see it and I feel it. Congratulations hun, because you have done something men have been afraid of doing. They think they may be giving away the secret of how men think. At the same time giving us women one up on the game. Just know this is genius. I am hear for the long run. Anxiously awaiting books arrival!!!

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